Praxis 5001 Practice Exams Practice Question
The following is a student's response to a prompt about E. B. White's novel Charlotte's Web: 'I think that Fern and Avery feel excited to roam the fair alone. Also, I think that the adults feel worried that the kids are alone in a big fair. In the story, it said, ''And if you get on those swings,'' said Mrs. Arable, ''You hang on tight. You hang on very tight, you hear?'' ''And don't get lost,'' said Mrs. Zuckerman. ''And don't get dirty.''' This shows that the adults are fretting over the kids, and acting very worried. Also, in the story, it said, '''Can I have some money?'' asked Fern. ''Can I too?'' asked Avery. ''Can I have a balloon?''' This shows that the kids are excited to go and roam the fair. In conclusion, Fern and Avery are excited to go to the fair, and the adults are worried about the kids.' Which of the following teacher recommendations will best help the student to strengthen the essay?
Correct Answer: C
Rationale: Stating the argument in the first sentence sets a clear direction for the essay, helping readers understand the main point immediately. This approach enhances focus and coherence throughout the response.
Option A, while valuable, may not address the need for a clear argument structure. Option B limits the essay's scope, which could hinder the exploration of both characters' emotions. Option D, although important, does not provide the same immediate clarity as establishing the argument upfront. Thus, beginning with a clear statement of the argument strengthens the overall effectiveness of the essay.
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